Hi everyone! This is my blog. My name is Alondra Paz Cruz Biagetti, I'm 19 years old and I love dancing. I'm a first year student of the English Teaching Program in Universidad Arturo Prat.
Here you will find all my works that I did in the subject of Reading and Composition I, so I hope you like it!. The contents are the following:
-General Reflection
-Pre-writing: Brainstorm
-First Draft
-Second Draft
-Of course I'm a night owl...
-First free-writing
-Second free-writing
-I love my mom!
-My favourite place
-Oktapodi Story!
domingo, 21 de diciembre de 2014
General Reflection
I liked to do this kind of works because the topics were too interestings. The process was hard but good, I learnt rules of punctuation, types of sentences, paragraph structures, connectors and too much more! I'm so happy because I think that I grow during this semester and I hope I continue learning and applying these rules. Thank you for everything...
Pre-writing: Brainstorm
Reflexion
I like the brainstorm, it helps you a lot for writing a draft and after a finally work. It helps you because it is very simple and you write everything that comes to your mind and then you start to sort and dismiss some ideas that are not relevant. It is a good support tool for the beginning.
First Draft: Why I prefer the night?
Reflexion
This was my first draft and I learnt because the teacher reviewed my grammar and my connectors, I learned very well for my second draft because I had less mistakes than the first one.
Second draft: Why I prefer the night?
Reflexion
With this second review, I learnt to change the word "things" for more meaningful words and connectors and also I learnt how to join more the ideas for my final paragraph.
Of course I'm a night owl...
I love night, for me it's the best time to do the things that I like or things that I must do. For example, I start the "night period" like 8 pm, I eat my dinner and I prepare myself to go to my dance practice. I dance from 9 pm until 11.30 pm and then I come back home. In that hour, I start to study or revise a little bit my homework or duties. Later, I dedicate to myself. I surf on the Internet while I listen to music. After that, I go to bed to watch TV and sleep. On weekends I do the same, but I hang out with my friends too. I love night because I feel energy, no pressures and I like to appreciate how the moon looks.
Reflexion
This work was easy to do it because the teacher checked my punctuation and grammar. I liked to do it because the topic was simple but interesting and now I enjoy it more because it's good with all the corrections and free of mistakes and that means that your work can be read it for everyone!
Second Free-writing: A song
Rockstar 101 - Rihanna featuring Slash

Music makes me feel free, it is the most important thing in my life because it is in all my day-to-day. Talking about a song, I like Rockstar 101 of the famous and wonderful singer Rihanna featuring the expert guitar player Slash from Guns N's Roses. I love it because of the guitars and the voice and also the drums. It's an amazing song.

Music makes me feel free, it is the most important thing in my life because it is in all my day-to-day. Talking about a song, I like Rockstar 101 of the famous and wonderful singer Rihanna featuring the expert guitar player Slash from Guns N's Roses. I love it because of the guitars and the voice and also the drums. It's an amazing song.
First Free-writing: Pets
I love my mom!
She is a beautiful woman (for me), medium height and plump and she is in her mid-fifties. She has oval and hazel eyes; shoulder lenght, curly and light brown hair and olive skin.
My mom is a brave woman because she is unafraid of difficult situations and for that she is very cautious in those moments. As a mother, she is pretty affectionate and extremely reliable. As a teacher she is very dedicated, determined and witty doing her work. Finally she is an honest and independent woman for all the sacrifices that she has done during her life. I admire her and of course I love her!
My favourite place
I like to go to and overlook that I know, it is placed in the upper part of Huayquique beach. I like it because is close and far of the sea at the same time, the beach is always quiet, peaceful and calm. It has a carpark so I can park and turn on the music. I go when I'm happy, angry, sad or whatever. I like to go alone or with friends to have important conversations. It's nice to think and talk while I'm looking at the calm sea.
Oktapodi Story!
sábado, 9 de agosto de 2014
auto-evaluacióN
En este taller aprendí muchas cosas, como por ejemplo, no repetir la palabra cosa. Este ramo es un autodesafío, me enfrenté a una hoja ordinaria en la que tenía que saber plasmar mis ideas con una estructura. También me presenté frente a una audiencia con diez mil ojos y mentes distintas que estaban dispuestas a escucharme. De mi desempeño en esta asignatura, específicamente de mi última presentación oral, destaco el volumen de mi voz, creo que es suficiente para la última persona en la sala y no es molesto para los de la primera fila. También destaco en mi, mi barrido visual, el tratar de comunicarles a todos lo que quiero decir del tema. Sé que debo mejorar mi desplazamiento al igual que mi conocimiento del tema para evitar muletillas. En general estoy contenta (no satisfecha) con lo logrado este semestre, siento que desde la primera vez hasta la última hubo un cambio en mi, con cada crítica se va creciendo y me alegro mucho no estar estancada e ir progresando. Gracias por todo.
La nota que me pongo es un 6.5.
La nota que me pongo es un 6.5.
viernes, 23 de mayo de 2014
"Pájaro soy, pájaro voy"
En cuanto a mi rostro, el diseñador no sabía dibujar óvalos. Como me portaba bien, no tiraron de mis orejas, así que no crecieron demasiado. Mis ojos son como dos almendras pintadas bien oscuras y mis pestañas siempre miran hacia mis cejas oscuras también. Cae recta y termina redonda mi nariz y mientras hablo se ejercitan los rosado, semi-delgados.
No me apuro, soy relajada. Si me cuesta, me esfuerzo el doble. Si te digo que sí, afirmaré hasta el final no importa cómo. Si algo me gusta, mi pasión se desencadena. Tengo un orden tan estratégico que parece desorden. Organizarme es un constante desafío, gracias a eso, ser despistada es otra cualidad. Soy tan insegura que agradezco que el corazón lata para asegurarme que aún vivo.
Tararear o cantar despacio es tan inconsciente como pestañear, nunca me quedo quieta para convencerme que no soy una estatua. Por mis venas corre la danza, es mi herencia más preciada, la música la acompaña en cada fibra de mi ser con sus bajos, melodías y ritmos. Canto siempre como las cigarras, tengo complejo de actriz, amo viajar y conquistar el mundo, pero también me creo oso y suelo invernar en mi cama cada vez que puedo. Me hubiese gustado cantar en los bares a lo Liza Minelli y/o participar en musicales como "Chicago", pero seguiré cantando en la ducha, actuando de profesora gringa frente a mis alumnos en unos años más y danzando hasta que mis cenizas sigan bailando en el gran escenario llamado "ánfora".
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